hey...
are you like the best MC on newgrounds?
I feel ya man, but this beat is not good dude.
Beat is whack but I can tell you weren't even tryin lol.
You got some real flow but I think that mic is making you sound muffled.
either your going for that "RAW" feeling or its just your style dude.
but yea man, nice! Yup..... the good old days... when kids didn't even know how to rap and they could only listen and hate. :-) i feel ya!
LOL, the ending is sweet. you kill it!
*blushes* lol
I love Biggie beats, altho dno if they're meant 4 me.
But ye this is only a few takes, as for the mic I dno wut 2 do 2 make it sound better.
Raw is def me and as for good old days dont have 2 b rap related, its really for anything.
I'm glad u like the track sir=) thanks 4 the review
a dude!
voice sounds too close to the mic, but you got flow dude. Its not perfect but those lyrics got straight style!
your shit is sweet as hell lol, i love it!
I'm tellin you dude, you need a better beat cuz your lyrics is like level 5, while your beat is level 1 or 2. ya kno?
Peace homie!
Thanks man. Just droppin shit on whatever my man throws at me. Gotta get back on the grind. So damn lazy. Haha, thanks for listening.
sup homie!
hey this is good shit but the beat is whack, love the guitar and your lyrics!
Hey, I got a beat waitin for some lyrics if your down, just show me som words or send me a PM or reply dude.
you got flow dude, if you want to get noticed, hit me up!
Thanks for the review. The beat is wack? That makes me sad. lol but really I wish I had some better sounds... and skills with the tools in FL studio. Alas in that field I'm a very slow learner. Thank you for the feedback and I'm glad you like the rhymes... and the sample. I'll try to improve my beats...
like i said...
ain't no one better than you on the mellowness!
I can hear the wiggles dude!! lol
but that horn just set the mood for me. its almost like a midnight bar song.
I wish you had more guitar samples or vocal stuff.
other than that, its another good vibe.
Peace. :-)
thanks, im glad you like the mellow mellownesses of my mellow songs. i did think about more guitar but thought it'd be better to keep it simple. thanks for the reviews, keep em comin
Raw!! :-)
Intro is very different from the rest, its pure raw!
nice and dirty, if anything the intro should of been smoother for the buildup.
But when I heard it, you had this perfect drum-fill that went with it.
some of the background sounds are a little too load, but it gives it that "raw emotion" ya know what I'm sayin!
What got me, was the guitars, they had the best groove, compared to the others. The rest was down low, while guitar was up high. It gave it that uplifting feeling near the end too.
This is better than Jazz or Rock, its all of the above!!! lol
Great mix and style dude, beat is good, so are those instruments.
Peace.
yeah i completely agree with the guitar, and the sound parts, thanks a lot man.
:-)
sup!
nice one!
love the drum's groove.
You got more?
Hey 'Jangels, thanks! I have two others in this style, check out "Ponies and Cake" and "Summer at the Monastery" :D
shit dude!
Nice homie!
If you ever wanna collab, hit me up on a pm.
I'm lookin for anyone who can rap cuz i got the hookup on some shit.
I got beats just waitin for some words man.
You are by far one of the best. Its straight fire!
Beat is ill, but the lyrics is what really kills it.
Peace bro!
my remix is better!
lol, but this is nice, hate the techno, you need to make it DNB or DUB.
or just hiphop. lol
yea!
scratching is by far the best. Nice one homie!
How did you do it? samples? turn tables? or just recording?
thats ill!!
peace.
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